When I'm Old

Michael Holding

When I'm old and mankey,
I'll never use a hanky.
I'll wee on plants
and soil my pants
and sometimes get quite cranky.

Revise

When were spoiled and grounded,

I'll always use a towel.
we wipe on sand
and burn my laces
and usually cause minnable cranky.

Free writing 3 minutes

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Poem

Turn Her Nation

Under dire hiii

Stuck in a jar color, blind

Stairs upon layers holding, heat 

Switch lava to rain 

A forbidden atmosphere 

Growls jogging, apart 

As eye walk brave towards a free,way

Granite doors open for,me... 

Brake 

A painting ground over,time

Gaining picked water

A tourist on our young, land 

Explanation: As I was writing the poem, it came pretty natural. Was not overthinking, just came organically. Creativity was presented in the the making. The truth is always between the lines, out of the box, and always in front of you. Takes patience to see.
It was chosen randomly and just flowed as I proceeded.
This assignment was expressive.

He was drinking

As the brim of the holder flowed such as a 

sea 

He, believed from his dry tone, down, 

it must be

He was drinking.

As the moonlight brightened

it was obvious 

He, believed right then. 

He was drinking.

No, it cant be, No, it will not be

He was drinking.

How can this be 

reality

He was drinking.

The cross on his chest 

fried

Eyes burning from its 

clove

He was drinking.

Where shall he 

go

What is called 

home...

He was drinking. 

Metaphors 
I'm a riddle in nine syllables,
An elephant, a ponderous house,
A melon strolling on two tendrils.
O red fruit, ivory, fine timbers!
This loaf's big with its yeasty rising.
Money's new-minted in this fat purse.
I'm a means, a stage, a cow in calf.
I've eaten a bag of green apples,
Boarded the train there's no getting off.
—from Sylvia Plath’s The Collected Poems (Harper Perennial, 2008)

Redo

Metaphors 
I'm a swoosh in nine syllables,
An elephant, a ohhhhh house,
A melon la lala lala on two tendrils.
O red fruit, ivory, fine ahhhhhh!
This loaf's big with its yeasty zip.
Money's new-minted in this blahhh purse.
I'm a means, a thud, a cow in calf.
I've eaten a bag of crunchy apples,
Boarded the train there's no plop off.
—from Sylvia Plath’s The Collected Poems (Harper Perennial, 2008)

Diction..

No one can see me, no one would stop me, no one could help me. They would just call the __police___ but it would be too late. My only regret is __the amount___. She’d have the coffee on. There was a time during my search for a cure when I tried everything to stop including giving up __hope_____. The smell filled the ___air___. I loved to drink a ___gallon___ of ___sprite___ in the _7__day_spread___, to say ___opening___ to ____late__ after we’d spent another ___night____ together. I’d tell her now it’s going okay except for the poison. It’s going okay except for how much I miss her and ___sprite___. __why_____? ____why__?! I’ve never been a very good __at this____. 

Welcome post, 

Hello, my name is Derick and welcome to electronic voyage where we are all able to express ourselves one way or the other.

Metaphors 

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade= , make lemonade, when life gives you lemons 

stuck between a rock and a hard place = stuck between a bed and a couch 

I eat like a pig when i am hungry = I run like a snail, when i eat like a pig  

He runs like a snail 

The bed makes me tired = the bed makes me feel lazy, when i eat like pig 

the couch makes me lazy = the couch makes me tired, the bed makes me feel lazy 

slippery as black ice = stuck between a rock and black ice 

Cliche 

The crack of dawn, making it rain, down to earth