Monday, January 30, 2017

Diction..


No one can see me, no one would stop me, no one could help me. They would just call the __police___ but it would be too late. My only regret is __the amount___. She’d have the coffee on. There was a time during my search for a cure when I tried everything to stop including giving up __hope_____. The smell filled the ___air___. I loved to drink a ___gallon___ of ___sprite___ in the _7__day_spread___, to say ___opening___ to ____late__ after we’d spent another ___night____ together. I’d tell her now it’s going okay except for the poison. It’s going okay except for how much I miss her and ___sprite___. __why_____? ____why__?! I’ve never been a very good __at this____. 




No one can see me, no one would stop me, no one could help me. They would just call the ___vigilantes__ but it would be too late. My only regret is __parting___. She’d have the coffee on. There was a time during my search for a cure when I tried everything to stop including giving up disbelief. The smell filled the ___ground___. I loved to drink a ___pint___ of ___pepsi___ in the ___14 night spread____, to say __closing____ to ____early__ after we’d spent another ___day____ together. I’d tell her now it’s going okay except for the poison. It’s going okay except for how much I miss her and ___pepsi___. __how_____? ___how___?! I’ve never been a very good __to this____. 



Answers: The tone and the meaning has changed when alternating the original words I put down with the opposition. Giving a complete rearrangement towards the mood of the paragraphs.

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